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Dissertation or Thesis: F.A.Q. 1 Questions about Writing a Dissertation For completing an M- or D-, please see: Dissertation Requirements See also the second page for Dissertation or Thesis: FAQ 2 Apparently, I have to write a research proposal. What do I need to do? The main purpose of a research proposal is to show that the problem you propose to investigate is significant enough to warrant the investigation, the method you plan to use is suitable and feasible, and the results are likely to prove fruitful and will make an original contribution. In short, what you are answering is 'will it work?' The level of sophistication or amount of detail included in your proposal will depend on the stage you are at with your PhD and the requirements of your faculty and University. In initial stages, the document you need to write will probably be three to ten pages long. It will give a general idea of what you are proposing to do but it isn't a binding contract. Often it serves as a starting point for discussions with your supervisor to firm up the topic, methodology and mechanics of your research. Some of you will be required to write a proposal at the time of confirming your candidature (usually at the end of the first year). In some instances, this is a document of four to five pages and may be viewed as a mere formality. In other cases a much more substantial document of 30 — 40 pages is expected. Therefore it is essential for you to check the requirements with your faculty. Regardless of the above distinctions you should never see writing a proposal as a worthless chore. Indeed, it is a very good idea to write a proposal anyway. You should use it to your advantage. It always forces you to think about your topic, to see the scope of your research, and to review the suitability of your methodology. Having something in writing also gives an opportunity to your supervisor to judge the feasibility of the project (whether it is possible to finish in time, costs, the equipment needed and other practicalities, time needed for supervision), to assess its likelihood of success, and its ability to meet the academic standard required of a dissertation or thesis. While there are no hard and fast rules governing the structure of a proposal, a typical one would include: aims and objectives, significance, review of previous research in the area showing the need for conducting the proposed research, proposed methods, expected outcomes and their importance. In experimentally based research it often includes detailed requirements for equipment, materials, field trips, technical assistance and an estimation of the costs. It could also include an approximate time by which each stage is to be completed. I've gathered lots of data, finished the experiments, explored the literature. What do I do with it now and how do I put it together? It's certainly a good feeling to have so much 'in the bag'. But there is also a temptation now to think that it's just a matter of assembling it. However, your data are of no real use alone. Their value is only in how they can answer your research question, and demonstrate the significance of your work and the contribution it makes to knowledge in your discipline. So … The first thing is to revisit your initial research question. Then stand back and think what it is you've actually discovered (often it is useful to write a few paragraphs to pin this down) and start to think how you would answer this question using your data. Although you may have gathered your data in various ways at different times — for example, through different experiments, questionnaires, interviews, the literature — this is the place to combine and integrate it all in the best way to make your point and answer your question. If you cannot see how the material you've gathered helps you to answer your question, then one way to see the thread is to tell yourself a story about it. For example:
Often your question now seems inadequate to express what it is you've found and, at the very least, you need to sharpen its focus. Or you may find you've only answered part of the original question. You need to decide whether you are going to answer the rest, i.e. gather more material, or whether you will reformulate and limit the question. Sometimes you need to process the data from many different angles to fully exploit the potential — there could be hidden surprises; but also sometimes it becomes apparent that some of your data are irrelevant and, even though it's painful, you may have to discard some of it. Once you have sharpened your research question, you have a clear picture of what you've found and its significance, you can put it together in a story, your next consideration is how best to present it to do justice to your thesis argument or overall theme. How you are going to present your discoveries in detail (which may even involve tables, graphs, diagrams, photos) requires a lot of thought and some trial and error. Here your possible alternative ideas need to be discussed with your supervisor. It's mostly through face-to-face discussion that such things get resolved. I have made several attempts at beginning to write my literature review but I keep changing it. Is there a 'correct' or proper way to organize it? The literature review is very often, apart from the initial proposal, the first substantial piece of writing that you are asked to do. For this reason alone, it is not surprising you may need to try several possible arrangements of it. Focusing the Literature ReviewDuring the course of research and writing a PhD thesis, you most likely will write the literature review more than once. As part of the process of trying to formulate their topic, some students write a kind of literature review which is often more like a survey. This could become more focussed as part of a proposal. Usually, once you start to work on your own research, the literature review takes a back seat, though you should systematically keep abreast of new developments in your field. Then, once you are finally 'writing up', the literature review needs either a major revision, or has to be tackled properly for the first time. Understandably, it is only now after one or two years of close work, that the significance of some of the literature you've glossed over earlier might strike you. You are now better equipped to appreciate it and to review it critically. Also, your research findings could well mean that you need to explore parts of literature that did not initially seem to you to be of direct relevance. Of course, the opposite also happens and perhaps you will decide to exclude whole areas of literature now marginal to your research. Organizing the Literature ReviewThe literature review is not an add-on but is absolutely integral to the whole work. So, it should be written in such a way that, in the first place, within the context of the field, it should set up the reader's expectations of where your work fits; it should provide the justification of why you are doing what you are doing; if necessary, it should also establish your theoretical framework and your methodology. A chronological organization therefore, although it may first suggest itself, is not usually the best way to achieve this. It is more important to isolate the issues and highlight the findings that are relevant to what you are doing. To get back to the question, then, the 'correct or proper way' to organize your literature review is the way you can best fulfil these needs. Since there is no general standard or correct structure, you have to try several possible arrangements to organise it best. It is of course frustrating and time consuming to write the whole literature review several times to see which way serves your purposes the best, but there are some ways that can help you decide on the possible arrangement. Working with a diagram, concept map, or some kind of shorter 'story' (which is more than an outline) will capture the logic of your proposed organization and therefore allow you to choose the clearest way before you write. Plotting out possible structures in this way also gives you something concrete to discuss with your supervisor or test on other readers. Here is an example of using a story to plot the flow of ideas:
While there is no correct way to organize the literature review in the sense of there being a recipe to follow, the ingredients we discussed above have to be there. Also, there may well be a best arrangement to serve the needs of your thesis. The literature review is so important to the whole work, it is worth your best efforts. Each time I finish a chapter or major section I say 'great'. But how can I make myself start again and get on with the next part? Let's begin with what could be a simple answer. It's a good idea not to finish at the point where you have to begin a whole section or chapter from 'scratch'. At the very least, ask yourself "What next?" and jot down a few clues about where and how you go on. Often, to be able to start again, you sometimes just need something to start with.
At the end of a chapter or section, it is often necessary to step back and ask yourself what you've done and where it's leading. Certainly before you begin any section you need to know what the main points are you will be making and jot them down, talk yourself through it, draw a diagram or concept map. You could take something as simple as:
And then you unpack the categories, perhaps again by a diagram, issue tree or map. What we need to remember is that, even though writing is linear, thinking is not. You need to have an intermediate stage where you capture your ideas in a visual form before you go on. Every time you start writing, especially at the beginning of a chapter or section, you need to pick up the threads of where you were. Therefore, it's also a good idea to read it to get yourself into it. If this doesn't work, then it may well be that the next chapter or section is not the best thing to move on to. You could, for example, write a very rough draft of a later section. Once you have a better idea of what you want or need to say after that point, you will probably have a better idea of how you must progress from there. The one thing you should never do is to bombard yourself with negative thoughts. You could think about positive outcomes of your work and motivate yourself to start. But you could also try to think about the subject matter and pick up anything that interests you or holds your attention. Follow this first thread and get your thinking back into the thesis again. Finally, if you have an interested listener, it's always helpful to talk to someone else about your project. These ideas may not be as useful as you might like, but then you need a few of these strategies to get yourself started again. There is no single guaranteed way to do it. Is there a particular thesis structure I have to follow? The easy answer is 'yes and no'. There are certain conventions specific to certain disciplines. However, these structures are not imposed on a piece of work. There are logical reasons why there is a conventional way of structuring the thesis, which is after all the account of what you've achieved through your research. Research is of course not conducted in the step-by-step way this structure suggests, but it gives the reader the most accessible way of seeing why this research was done, how it was done and, most importantly, what has been achieved. If you put side by side all the questions you had to answer to finish your research and what is often proposed as a typical structure of a thesis, then you will see the logic of the arrangement. That does not mean, however, that you have to name your chapters in this way. In some disciplines, it very often works out like this; in others, this structure is implied. For example, in many science theses, the following a basic outline of the structure; in many humanities theses, the final structure looks very different, although all of these questions are answered one way or another.
Occasionally a thesis is written which does not in any way comply with this structure. Generally the reasons you want to have a recognized, transparent structure are that, to some extent, it is expected and the conventional structure allows readers ready access to the information. If, however, you want to publish a book based on the thesis, it is likely that the structure would need to be altered for the sake of the different genre and audience. I've spent months trying to formulate my questionnaire to work or to get the research data I need but time is running out. What can I do? Despite good planning, the unexpected happens or things can go wrong. If what you are trying to do was, in the first place, well-designed and feasible, and you and your supervisor are convinced the project will still work and eventually be finished, …. BUT, the data gathering is taking longer to work or you've had difficulty getting information or access to vital sources and materials, and the problem is that you simply need more time, then consult the university regulations to check the procedures and seek an extension now. If at any time you suspect that, because of similar reasons, your work looks as though it will take longer than originally planned, do signal immediately through the official, interim report processes that there may be difficulties, so that any later request for an extension has a history and therefore has a more convincing basis. If there were good reasons for attempting what you did, but now it is clear that your project is not possible to complete in the way you first envisaged, then you have to stop now and refocus immediately. For example, a student started with the plan to use a known technique, which had worked successfully in several species, to gather data from another species. There were no indications that this would present any problems, yet it turned out that the known technique didn't work in the species to be studied. The student did in fact push on and develop a successful technique and, since this was such a significant achievement, it became the focus of the thesis. The other aims were achieved too, although not to the extent previously envisaged. This example shows the need to be flexible, to see the new opportunities, and that research cannot always be planned to the last step. Certainly it is rewarding if the obstacle can become the new focus of your work, but this is not always the case. Sometimes, frustration is due to lack of skills, inappropriate equipment, or the involved university procedures of ordering resources, getting ethical clearance, permission to approach people you need as subjects or who will serve as resources. The most important thing then, of course, is to identify what the problem is. If you need laboratory, computing, library or statistical skills, for example, identify the sources of assistance inside and outside your study centre and discuss this with your supervisor. If getting this help cannot be speeded up, turn your attention to other things and do these in the meantime rather than fuel the frustration. Do talk to other students, researchers and staff — and not necessarily only to those in your immediate field. They may be able to suggest ways around the problem, have faced and found a way around similar obstacles, or be able to brainstorm with you to expose all elements of the problem. The very act of talking about it often allows you to define the problem in a more succinct way and, by doing this, to solve it or have a better starting point for finding a solution.
I love doing all the research/ interviews but I just can't write about it. How do I overcome writer's block? The phrase 'writer's block' covers a variety of situations. In our experience, absolute writer's block — that is, where someone literally can't write anything at all, not even a note to a friend or a shopping list, for example — is very rare. Then possibly you need to work individually with someone like a counsellor. In all other cases, committing yourself to write for only fifteen minutes a day is often a starting point. This must be faithfully observed and then extended only slowly. To overcome 'writer's block, you should look at what is causing it. It could be that:
Writing is a complex and slow process. Expecting it to flow effortlessly because you are writing about something you know and understand well and for which you have done the work is a mistake. This kind of mistaken belief can rob you of your confidence which, in turn, further turns you off from writing and compounds the cycle. However, it is also true that you can be a brilliant researcher but, if you don't communicate what you have done to other people, then you may as well have been doing it for nothing. If you are moving from the stage of doing mainly research to concentrating on writing, you may need to develop a new routine. Some professional writers set up definite daily routines to achieve their writing aims. In the same way you could plan to write at a particular time of the day for a particular length or time or word limit. On some days, nothing seems to help and this may be a time to take an afternoon off and enjoy yourself without feeling too much guilt. A break like this could help you to refocus and start afresh the next day. How do I know if I have done enough, or if my work is good enough for a PhD? This could be best answered if you take a comparative stance. Try to look at your research results and see how their significance compares with other work in the same field. Try to publish, present papers at conferences, and discuss your work in as many spheres as possible to get feedback. Making your work accessible to other researchers and also finding out about other people's work in progress is important. Familiarity with a range of types of studies better allows you to gauge the standard of your own work. Of course you rely on your supervisor to a considerable extent. One of the roles of your supervisor is to be able to judge and advise on the quality of your work. Your supervisor could be sure your work is good enough for a PhD but thinks this is self evident and just doesn't mention it to you. Perhaps you need to discuss it. Occasionally a supervisor becomes as enmeshed in your work as you do and may not have enough distance from which to judge it objectively. Indeed, the supervisor's enthusiasm sometimes causes him or her to urge you to do more and more — which may be nice but not necessary. Maybe you both need to discuss it with an impartial person or persons. Whereas some students express this doubt in terms of quantity, in our experience, this question really taps the issue of original contribution, academic standards and scholarship. If these are the focus, then 'enough' in terms of evidence will be addressed. Concerns of outright thesis length, however, do arise and institutional guidelines often give an upper rather than a minimum page limit. For example, the University of Queensland rules state that "the thesis should not be unnecessarily long. Although length may vary according to the topic and the discipline, a thesis is expected to be no more than 100,000 words or 400 pages, including maps and diagrams, but excluding bibliography." My topic is really interesting but it isn't something that can be squeezed easily into two years. How do I handle it? The first thing you should ask yourself is why you think that two years is not enough. If it is just a vague feeling you have, do set your mind at rest by looking into it thoroughly. You need to look at your topic to examine its scope and determine what's involved in investigating it. For example, if it involves experiments, how many would you have to perform and how long is it reasonable for each to take? If it is a qualitative study, how many respondents do you plan to interview, what other documents or sources do you need to access? You could also think about similar studies done before and compare the scope of your work with that of other studies. You should, of course, also talk with your supervisor. It may be that you are underestimating yourself or overestimating the topic. One of the things we find is that many students talk in very broad terms about the topic they propose to research. This could be what is causing your difficulty. Even if this global topic stays as your official topic, you need to pull it apart, unpack it, and generate questions around it. By doing this you can appreciate the full extent of the topic. After this, you could well convince yourself that your topic is manageable within two years. Or you could decide that one particular part of it will stand alone and be really worth doing. You have to take the risk, of course, that once you have started asking questions about it, there is always the chance that you will discover that it doesn't have much potential. Out of this soul-searching you must come up with a well-defined, worthwhile topic because only then can you and your supervisor decide whether or not it can be done in a reasonable time. If you fail to resolve the question of whether or not it can be done in time, you will probably lack commitment to your project. And lack of commitment is counterproductive and undermining, — it dampens your enthusiasm and motivation, and gives you all sorts of excuses for not getting on with it. Lots of problems have come up along the way and I don't think I'm going to get it done in time. Is there any way to get an extension? Throughout the long process of doing a Masters or a PhD, especially if you are a part time student, it is impossible to avoid problems completely. Although universities are tightening their rules about terms of candidature, most universities are realistic about the need for extensions. However, you need reasonable grounds on which to ask for an extension and often you will need to provide some evidence, for example, medical evidence, or the background of having alerted your supervisor or others to the problems when they arose. You may also be asked to commit yourself to an absolute completion date. If this is not feasible, you could explore the option of whether your institution would allow a deferment in your candidature. Remember that the university's rules and the sponsor's rules are not the same. If you hold a scholarship you would also have to look at the conditions and see whether they allow for an extension. In any case, you need to consider the financial implications of any extension. I am three quarters of the way through but it isn't as fruitful as I thought it would be. How am I going to rescue my thesis? What has led you to believe this is so? Is it your own opinion or do you have some outside evidence? For example, has your supervisor expressed concern that the topic is not working out as well as you both thought it should? Is it because you are reading published material in this area and going to conferences and you've discovered others are doing work in the same field which seems much more important? In other words, you need to make sure your impression is more than just the usual doldrums of the middle years of being a doctoral student. Sometimes we begin a PhD wanting to excite the world but, when we get down to it, what we actually do is, like most things, 90 percent routine and our results appear very pedestrian to us. What you're working on and have now achieved becomes so familiar and simple to you that you start assuming that everyone knows it. This could lead you to underestimate the value of your work. Sometimes it is a matter of looking at the results in a different way and possibly finding another way of exploring or packaging what you've found to underscore its significance. However it is possible that indeed there isn't enough in your results. You and your supervisor then have to look at it from all angles. Work out if it is just a case where more research is needed in the same area to give it depth. Perhaps you even have to discard some aspects of the topic and to focus and concentrate on a more specific area. This could, of course, require further reading, planning or experiments. Or perhaps you need to broaden the scope. In this case, you might reconsider some of the aspects you originally discarded which are related. For example, one student experimenting with a simple treatment for a common plant poisoning in animals found this treatment not to be as useful as anticipated and therefore she devised investigations of other treatments. In the course of this, she also found that there were crucial details of the signs not previously written up. It is often useful to cast the net a bit wider to give your argument further support, or a comparative focus, for example. The caution here is that you must remember the whole thesis has to be unified and not a loose collection of bits and pieces. It could be a good idea for you to recall why you thought it was a worthwhile project in the first place and revisit the literature which led you to believe this line of enquiry would be fruitful. Perhaps then a major contribution of your work might be to offer a more thorough critical analysis of this very literature and use your results as evidence to argue that the approach or line of enquiry suggested in the literature yields little. For example, your empirical research could reveal the flaws in a particular model or theoretical framework you've adopted. So, changing the focus by narrowing, broadening, foregrounding the marginal, re-examining the results, or by changing the emphasis from results to the theory could all rescue, and even improve, your thesis. Now I see how I should have done it all along. Is it too late to change? Almost everyone who has finished a PhD would say that it was only when they had finished that they really saw how it should have been done. If this is what you're feeling, but have sufficient evidence to know that the work is good enough as it is, don't worry. All the insights you gain doing your PhD research don't have to be used to improve this particular work. You will use this knowledge, skills and experience in your future work. The important questions to answer are: how crucial is the change you're thinking about? And, what are the consequences of not making such changes? If not making the change means that it is doubtful whether your work will be of acceptable standard, then no matter at what stage of your research you're at, or how much work is involved in the change, you have to make that change. Since this is such an important and profound decision you shouldn't make it alone; therefore discuss it fully with your supervisor. Of course any change will lead you to consideration of other constraints, such as time, cost, and your own financial situation. If on the other hand the gains are slight but the proposed change would involve a lot of work, then maybe you should accept the work as it stands. Sometimes the change you are contemplating will have a major impact, even to the point of overturning your original stance, and yet it will not necessarily involve an excessive amount of work. The work is in the thinking and re-conceptualizing. This is probably worth doing. It is almost always possible to find ways of improving your work, and up to a point this is a necessary part of reviewing, re-examining, redrafting your thesis. However avoid being sucked into an endless process of making minor changes for only small gain when your PhD thesis has reached the point when it should be submitted. It could just be reluctance to let go and face what happens next. Is it really necessary to publish while doing a PhD? There is no simple answer to this question. It is safe to say that we cannot think of any reason for not publishing but, when thinking if you should, let's consider the reasons for wanting to.
So writing a seminar or conference paper or an article for publication could be a very good idea. It gives you an opportunity to practise your academic writing. It exposes you to critical assessment of your work. And it gives you the psychological boost of knowing that you are achieving something worthwhile. However, the design and structure of your work may mean that isolating a discrete, publishable part is not possible. For example, it may not be until the end of your research that the value of the work can be shown. In this situation you mustn't feel pressured to publish. But you would be wise to find alternative forums for presenting your work to your peers such as at seminars, conferences and the like. Of course, time constraints will also govern your decision to publish. In addition you have to weigh the risks of rejection against the benefits of publication. These issues and also questions of where to publish and the protocol of possible joint authorship should be discussed with your supervisor. What can I expect from my supervisor and what does my supervisor expect from me? Working on an understanding of mutual expectations with your supervisor is an essential part of developing a good working relationship. Do this at the beginning. Some students have no idea what is reasonable to expect while others have what can only be called a wish list. What actually is the truth varies between supervisors and departments. However, expectations can be discussed under several broad headings.
The framework in which this support happens varies but what you would expect is to have frequent, dedicated meetings with your supervisor. These are reasonable expectations but they do have to be negotiated and formally set up right from the beginning and then reviewed as needs change. The other side of the coin is that your supervisor has reasonable expectations of you. These would include:
In other words, you should be able to expect a professional supervisor, and your supervisor should be able to expect you to be professional also. This relationship is so important that it warrants time, thought and energy to keep it working. When do I start writing? Many students think there is a right time to start writing. This is not the case — writing happens throughout. But, you need to ensure that it does happen and is focussed on something. In a sense there is writing for doing, writing for thinking, and actually writing the PhD thesis. The short answer to the above question is that you start writing when you have something to say. For example:
Unless you write something down it is easy to think that you know what you are going to say. We've known students who think that something will be the centre piece of their thesis but, once written, this part turns out to be of only marginal importance. Writing is a test of your understanding and it forms a solid basis for moving forward or revealing the gaps in your work. There is every reason to begin it early. Show the other page for Dissertation or Thesis: FAQ 2 Copyright © Calvary University, 1998 All rights reserved. |
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